Ch. 2 pg. 21

posted June 13th, 2017, 3:01 am


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November 28th, 2017, 2:57 pm

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I like how your background people feel like they belong to the rest of your style now. The stick figures of the first chapter seemed a little jarring and I wanted to suggest keeping the crowds monochrome but SHAPED like the rest of your characters - and this is exactly it!

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